Two furry rugs, with softly beating hearts, drape Asian-style couch and chair. It is local-standard catnap time here and beams of muted sunlight, dissected by vertical blinds, stick to the floor in long rectangles.
I feel a cool breeze flowing jet stream like, except north to south. Its low-latitude airstream forms contrasting weather fronts of electrostatic titillation on my warm tingly skin.
If very small people lived on my body they’d be dodging lightning bolts and trying to smooth down their out-of-control big hair.
This means the sliding glass doors at the back and front of my apartment are fulfilling their mechanical manifesto: Allow the outside and the inside worlds to meet.
lovely word painting, busy, but please be easy.
Happy Rally.
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This is very breezy and light. I can almost feel the outside and the inside worlds meeting.
A wonderful read indeed 🙂
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You’ve painted a lovely picture with your words. I could almost feel the breeze. Nice!
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clear image.
great post!
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Very nice!
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Thanks, Emily. I love your hair.
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Quite lilting and lifting. Very nice.
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Very cheery indeed. I can envision the breeze.
Well done!
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Thank you, Andy.
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Damn boy!
You make me feel inferior in my poem skills. 😉
Lovely poem!
Amazed me yet again!
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You are equal in every respect. 😀 Develop voice, write and write, vary tone and style, write and write.
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What an interesting poem. The combination of terms one would not consider to be poetic, with the flow and artistic touch, is wonderful. Nice!
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Hello,
Appreciate your participation at poets rally,
Please return favor to poets who are here yet you did not reach them initially,
Bless your day.
Have fun!
LET US KNOW AFTER YOU ARE DONE 18 COMMENTS.
😉
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Thanks, Jingle. You’re a peach.
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I love when the outside meets the inside!
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What a fresh and delightful read. Uplifting.
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Iris
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Really felt the lightness of the poem, as light as a breeze!
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Nice poem! Like the sliding door making the inside and the outside world meet….
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What a lovely subject and deeply expressed! Loved this!
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