Black eyes make him weep
Tongue to teeth he seeps
Black eyes make him weak
Tongue tip to teeth blade deep
Black eyes and bruised thighs
Tongue man likes white trailer, stub toed feet
White trailer girl, she makes him weak
She mows dead grass in bare stub toed feet
He watches from a lawn chair, drinking sweet tea
She shows him bruised thighs and black eyes
Tongue to teeth he seeps
Black eyes and bruised thighs
Tongue tip to teeth blade deep
Stub Toed Feet
Pole Vaulting on the Sun 
Oh, fabulous.
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Thank you. I hope you’ll read more.
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very special way of using your words here..
lovely job.
A++
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mows dead grass in bare stub toed feet – great line 🙂
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superb wording..
keep it up.
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Black eyes make him weep
Tongue to teeth he seeps
Black eyes make him weak
Tongue tip to teeth blade deep…
love the rhyming and rhythms..well done…
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Thank you, Jingle. You’re lovely.
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I love the way you use language brilliant!
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I enjoyed the word play and the originality of this.
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Thank you, David.
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Oh yeah, I like this. rock on.
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