Remember,
everything passes.
Humans, onion skins,
and apple cores are born
cast off
cast out
cast aside,
and in passing through
the turnpikes and elbow joints
of our handmade sewage ways,
or the cervix and labia
of our handmade bodies,
arrive like pachinko balls
slotted in suburbs, city centers,
or prairie towns, naked.
It’s not our reward,
and it’s not our punishment,
this curly-grained lay of the land.
It’s the chance encounter;
it’s the turn of the screw,
a game we’ve made it.
From a donkey born,
a unicorn can grow.
And unicorns can harbor
shriveled, beat-less hearts,
as donkeys can pump
fierce oxygen-rich dragon blood.
So, gutter born or mansion raised,
we all started life in a pear-shaped organ
between the bladder and the rectum,
our handmade sewage ways,
in a town called Corpus.
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Fantastic weave Poet! Love the barn yard yet whimsical imagery (quite a feat actually…you really make it work) Will you be linking it up with dVerse today for OpenLinkNight?
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Thank you. Yes, I’d love to join OpenLinkNight. I’m very glad you like it.
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Hello, I enjoy your poetry and really would like to nominate you for Versatile Blogger. 🙂 Heres the link for details. Thank you for posting. http://knockaroundmeg.wordpress.com/2012/01/10/nomination-whaaa/
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Thank you. I accept. You’re very kind to have nominated me.
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love the rawness in this..and some great imagery as well..very cool
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Thank you, Claudia. Glad to be a part of the fun.
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I liked the tone, shifting from sacred to profane gracefully. Well done.
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well done. i like the premise you set up here, stays very solid all the way thru. every stanza is self-contained and independant, very controlled and polished. a pleasure to read
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A bit chilling but great! Wonderfully played and yes all will come to pass on day even my little rhyming, you know and my word play.
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Wow
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A pragmatic and interesting take on life and meaning (if there is one) ..I like these lines:
It’s not our reward,
and it’s not our punishment,
this curly-grained lay of the land.
It’s the chance encounter;
it’s the turn of the screw,
a game we’ve made it.
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Strong poetry here. Imagery is top notch. Love that you managed to get everyone naked. I live in a prairie town and I don’t want to see most of these people even if we all came from the same place. 🙂 Love it
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damn hot write man…yes we all come from the same place…great grit in your voice in this one…
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WOW!!!!!!
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You’ve outdone yourself, Kshawn! This is really good!
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Very nice, Shawn! I especally like:
It’s not our reward,
and it’s not our punishment,
Beautiful ending, too : )
-Eva
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kKshawn, that was whack. Loved it!!
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Kshawn, sorry for the typo!
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The rawness is entrapping. One wants to not go there but your words lead on.
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This is magnificent. There is a classical feel to it, as if the words, once said, will echo down through years into time, catching readers and listeners over and over again.
From a donkey born,
a unicorn can grow.
And unicorns can harbor
shriveled, beat-less hearts,
as donkeys can pump
fierce oxygen-rich dragon blood.
There is both warning and hope in these lines as well as in the poem as a whole. There is also the sense that life is life, which leads forward to death. Congratulations on having the skill to write this.
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Reblogged this on Sick Poetics and commented:
read it again
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