Feed the monster to pay it back
Feed the monster to pay it back
We feed the monster to pay it back
We feed the monster to pay it back
We’ve fed our monster to pay it back
Our monster we’ve fed to pay it back
Our monster we feed to pay us back
The monster we feed is paying us back
We feed pay back
We pay feed back
We feedback
Feedback
Feedback
Back
Pole Vaulting on the Sun 
Yes!
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Food for my mind!
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fun word play.
🙂
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your adjective poem is great… here’s mine for week 38.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/
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rip the words limb from limb, stick them back together, words like barbies become playthings, keep playing 🙂
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Great play on words . It put power to the meaning.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/02/17/truth-be-known/
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Interesting thought…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-wanderer.html
Twitter @VerseEveryDay
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You know, some descendant of that computer that just won Jeopardy might someday trap a fine mind like yours in a metal box and keep you iterating for eternity and while I’d enjoy your company in that hell, I’d rather you get to die around 120 or so.
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Love the play on words and how individuals give and take throughout life!
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Nice words play!
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wow ! such a play of words
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How fun!
Great job!
Loved this so much!
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So many directions to go with this poem. It is really creative.
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I really liked how you worked the end out. Very nice.
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Playing with words is allowed !! LOL
nice !
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This is an interesting piece. Different, and therefore intriguing.
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Nice word play 🙂
Here’s mine
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Heh, very nice. At first I thought it might have been a subtle turn at the consumerist lifestyle and it morphs into a statement every writer can identify with. Great work, thanks for sharing!
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Thank you, LeiffyV. Glad you found it and enjoyed. Gotta say, I truly like your blog photo. It has a commanding — and insane! — quality.
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Oh so concur!
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Thanks, lunawitch15! It’s good to connect.
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sounds like a really dark song in one way, but very much sensible in another. nice take..!
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Greetings:
Hope all is well.
Noting that you have been part of poets rally in the year of 2011,
what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!
Come join our poetry rally today if you wish to mingle and get inspired!
A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Looking forward to seeing you share.
Respect and hugs.
xoxox
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Frightening and makes you think. Fantastic poem.
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I really like the rhyming. Interesting thought as well. I enjoyed it. Happy Poets Rally, hope for you to visit mine back. Thanks for this wonderful poem.
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powerful word play.
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