Our Monster We Feed

Feed the monster to pay it back
Feed the monster to pay it back
We feed the monster to pay it back
We feed the monster to pay it back
We’ve fed our monster to pay it back
Our monster we’ve fed to pay it back
Our monster we feed to pay us back
The monster we feed is paying us back

We feed pay back

We pay feed back

We feedback

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28 thoughts on “Our Monster We Feed

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  2. You know, some descendant of that computer that just won Jeopardy might someday trap a fine mind like yours in a metal box and keep you iterating for eternity and while I’d enjoy your company in that hell, I’d rather you get to die around 120 or so.

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  3. Heh, very nice. At first I thought it might have been a subtle turn at the consumerist lifestyle and it morphs into a statement every writer can identify with. Great work, thanks for sharing!

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  5. Greetings:

    Hope all is well.

    Noting that you have been part of poets rally in the year of 2011,
    what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
    along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!

    Come join our poetry rally today if you wish to mingle and get inspired!

    A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

    Looking forward to seeing you share.
    Respect and hugs.
    xoxox

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  6. I really like the rhyming. Interesting thought as well. I enjoyed it. Happy Poets Rally, hope for you to visit mine back. Thanks for this wonderful poem.

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